critiques of presentation:
 

• Approach is witty

  • Ghost-like figures are in a sense humorous

• There is a story to the installation, however it gets confused along the way

• Perhaps rethink the mirror glass theatre

• Identified the problem of safety in Fort Lane area, but how is this proposal a solution?

• Keeping coming back to context I am coming from

• The storyboard

  • Look up Gerard Richter’s glass work

• Revisit the colours and combination of layering from the site sequence

• There is a temporal aspect that I can consider

• Revisit top right and bottom left images of materiality slide —> reminiscent of Oliver Eliasson

Notables

• The colours of the image sequence and the materiality

  • Perhaps pursue this route

• Research Gerard Richter

• Is there a more poetic way to represent ghosting?